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    u guys i invite all of u 2 check my silly poems sory 

 

                                                                                                                                              Hello guys ,

how are you doing? I hope you are just doing fine . I just want to offer these imaginary thoughts as I promised you since before . it's one of many which I had wrote them by own hands I'm quite sure that there is grammatical  mistakes so you have to ignore them you know my English language is not too good (deal)? go ahead and come to my fancy world and hear sounds of darkness in addition, I want you to send to me your opinion about it okay, enjoy reading it....                       

The lost

 

life became so numb

I became so weaker than before

I can't feel you baby

I feel like I'm losing control

I feel  some thing happens inside me and I actually don't know ,what it is ?

I feel shakes stresses me out

and the death runs into my veins

and the wave of passing out contains me

so please, please get closer of me  ,touch me with your soft hands , pass them over my sweated forehead and kiss me before I die ,  tell me about the  most happiest moments in our life

or we  still can bring my  poetry book which has wonderful tunes to start singing them to a person at the pain of death, choice the most beautiful one.

you know  what! I had wrote all these lines in ages full of hot seductions when  I was a silly-eyed

when the old lady got raged on her fetus

when my awareness was in the sad logic

it  remembers me in my innocence in the dark side of my life

before the coming of accursed age, which is:

sells and buys me alive…. …..

….gives me the money but it couldn't make me rich….pours me the cold water but it couldn't make irrigated…. fully

oh , what a misery nightingale? locked up in a cage made of gold!

So ,please don't you ever be sorry for me oh, my baby I'm begging you not to be sorry  for me!!

I got tired of seriousness along with obscenity

I got tired of everything in my charged world with rock music

I got tired of a song that which is badly composed

I got tired of seeing  young girls who are lost their charming because of grieves and depressions

So, please for the last time touch me with your soft  hands pass them over my sweated forehead again and again and kiss me again and again

I can see my path straight to the paradise 

it might be happen and we will be faced again in the hereafter as we had met each other on the first day in the high school!!!

Hey!! How did you like it ? by the way I have got a lot to send them to you if don't mind of course

DO WRITE BACK TO ME I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO HEAR OF YOU , (TAKE CARE)

BYE

 

plz contact me on these addresses take care guys bye



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