Hello there!

Welcome to São Paulo Network!


-just correcting presentation text!

Info created by gurisena on Jan 30, 2008 @ 18:38

vincent on Feb 27, 2008 @ 13:07

Thanks I have informed gurisena of your corrections so he can correct himself
best regards,
Vincent

francischini on Feb 27, 2008 @ 02:26

Here you go my correction. But I have to say that I'm not an English teacher, one thing, "airing" doesn't make any sense for me in this text, so, I don't know what our friend Gurisena is trying to say with that. Another thing, the sentence "there are many particularities among São Paulo people" is very ambiguous, I've just corrected the grammar.


Hello there!

Welcome to the São Paulo Network!

São Paulo is the most populous area in Brazil, and represents the major part of its GDP - Gross Domestic Product. Here you'll find people from many parts of the world, and many cultural attractions too, like museums, theaters, beautiful places to airing  (???), wonderful restaurants, cafés, and cinemas.

People from São Paulo are very dynamic, every single one is unique here, there are many particularities among São Paulo people, many tribes, religions, ethnics... it's nearly a Babel tower!

vincent on Feb 25, 2008 @ 23:48

Thanks francischini ! Would you mind correcting the whole text for us ? best regards, Vincent

francischini on Feb 25, 2008 @ 23:36

Please, would you mind correcting the info about São Paulo ?  There are many problems in this text like "persons" and "betweens", the plural of "person" is "PEOPLE" and, like in Portuguese, there isn't  "betweens", it's always "BETWEEN", and  "BETWEEN" needs an "AND", for instance "between you and me".

This is just an example, there is a lot more.